Today is the first day back at pt
England!!! we went to the hall. For an assembly we were looking at some movies and acts. We had to stay and see the movies I liked it. What was the movies like you may ask?
This was on a monday just letting you know. I liked how Mr Burt and Mr j was acting it was so funny because Mr Burt was saying that he had the bigger fish. Then they went on to the sisters part then Mr s just came out of nowhere on a motorbike yes a motorbike. Then it was Mr Burt Said i have a better marshmallow because they were having marshmallows then it was the end then we went to class and now i am doing this story.monday just letting you know. I liked how Mr Burt and Mr j was acting it was so funny because Mr Burt was saying that he had the bigger fish. Then they went on to the sisters part then Mr s just came out of nowhere on a motorbike yes a motorbike. Then it was Mr Burt Said i have a better marshmallow because they were having marshmallows then it was the end then we went to class and now i am doing this story.
Fakaalofa lahi atu Julius! I liked the part where you wrote "just came out of nowhere .. ". Because you are right - out of the blue, he appeared on this cool scooter. Mr Burt and his team used a lot of different props to show different ideas in their song, it was very good. I thought everything was good from the scooter, fishing & especially the marshmellows .. YUM!
ReplyDeleteGreat ideas with your writing Julius! Read your writing aloud so you can hear if it makes sense. Proofread & edit your work. Keep writing!!