Narrative writing

One cold cold day me and my friends were hungry we wanted some crayfish. So we went to Pt England beach we were looking and was not a thing so we went to dive and the water was cold we saw one crayfish but it was to little so we went with it seeing of it had gone to its mum or dad so we went back up. It is the next morning we had no food, so we went and got some kfc. It was a sunny day we went back and saw all of the crayfish and there was a big one but it was deep down we went and got a boat and went to the deep side I went in and dived and saw it so I was trying to get it but it was too fast so I went to my boat and got a spear got it and went back in. and got him with my spear I went back put him on the boat and got some more. Then I got home cooked it up made some salad with and had a good feed.